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digital alchemist · Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 7:09 pm Post subject: Ad Series

This is the 1st in a series of 3 ads for a sign company.

Gloves Ad

I'll post the other 2 when I have some time to upload them.
Let me know what you think

Thanks
DA

graphicdesigner · Learner Joined: 20 May 2006 Posts: 74

I like it. Smile

You've used spacing and white space quite effectively. You also tied in the colors without overdoing it.The red stands out nicely, and the typeface on the top part of the ad stands out and adds some nice contrast. And then you tied in the grey.

You might want to use a font other than Impact mind you. It's just that you see that font around a lot. It does the trick though.

A nice clean layout. Thanks for sharing. Smile

Brian
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digital alchemist · Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:47 am Post subject:

thank you for the feed back. it is much appreciated. I also have an issue with the impact font, but it had already been used in related marketing materials so it was used to somewhat tie the ads to the related materials.

here are the other 2 ads in this series (I apologize for the image quality)
ad #2
ad #3
feed back would be appreciated

thanks
DA

Peter P · Learner Joined: 20 May 2006 Posts: 16

Pretty good on all of these. Not sure I like the belt of the last one hanging over the letters. It looks very flat to me.

Good concept though,and they all stand out pretty good.

PP

mercy · Joined: 11 Aug 2006 Posts: 9

Nice ads. Among the three I like the first one. It looks good and professional.
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